Mirror+Writing

The young girl staring back at me seems familiar. Her hair is as scruffy as a cat’s hair ball. It is browny, blackish. It is really bushy and she always wears it in a bun. When it is down it is as curly as grandma's hair. Her eyes are dark brown, surrounded by goldy red vain. With a little mole by her right eye.

She was born in the year 1997. She was born at the coolest place, the Waikato hospital. Throughout her long twelve years she has had some weird, wild and funny experiences like the one she remembers the most. It felt like chocolate land. There was chocolate everywhere, huge, small and even tiny Easter eggs. Time for an Easter hunt! We all ran out like a pack of storming rhinos. Yummy - she had found her first creamy, caramel Easter egg. She hunted for more, unfortunly it was nearly the end...only two more fat Easter eggs to go!! It felt like the end of the world only having a couple of chocolate eggs. When her brother asked if she wanted an Easter egg, she was very suspicious, but she took it anyway! She opened it like it was a million dollars. Crack, crack... ewwww!!!!! A REAL Egg, screaming with terror Eventually he got in trouble.

Her ambitions for the future would be to become a famous singer but if that is not successful then she would like to become a professional Netball player. Her best subjects in school are math.She loves playing sports especially Touch, Netball and Soccer. The subjects she is not so good at is writing.


 * //Miss Crawford - You say you aren't good at writing, but I think that this is pretty good! There are a few spelling errors that need changing, I have underlined those. I loved your story about the easter eggs.//**